sonic gets off on the auditory stuff and shadow gets off on the visual stuff send post
never kill yourself we're so back i might be able to get this under 20k even before beta
nah, i give up ☠️ i don't know how to make this briefer
if you're not taking part in the exchange and wanna try and help me somehow shorten this piece, dm me
i guess i'll be content as long as they don't completely hate it ☠️
knuxadow where shadow gets caught by rouge pretty much immediately after coming back from the angel island because his chaos energy is dysregulated from being near the master emerald for too long (and kissing boys)
sonic is SO into shadow's voice, he can keep going for hours as long as he's got shadow gasping and groaning into his ear
and shadow can't finish unless he can see sonic's face 🥺
the fact i struggle with brevity just shows my weaknesses as a writer 😭 i'm sure there are many elements i can remove, as well as get rid of repetitions, but it's going to be difficult to really shorten it into anything below 15k
i really need to somehow make it shorter once i'm editing the first draft ☠️ i'm not entirely sure if the person i'm making this for would appreciate a lengthy work, but short stuff is something i've always struggled with
like, i really really really hope this is okay if i manage to fit it under 20k
... 17k words into my 💙🖤 exchange piece and i'm starting to second guess myself
