Incidentally, those two chapters I rewrote told the exact same story, and even had bits copied and pasted in from the original drafts, but were simply structured better.
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Well, my first draft was more or less my final draft. I mean sure, I edited and reworded a TON of stuff, but I only fully rewrote two chapters after I finished them and realized they just weren't interesting enough to make me keep writing.
Of course, some...
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