Now for the horrible and mortifying experience of people actually *looking at* stuff I wrote...
First round edits on Roses Under Glass: Chapter 4 are... DONE.
Weighing in at just under 14,000 words right now. Certainly needs some punching up, and some proper line edits, but a few scenes are definitely absolute bangers this time around.
Ohhhhh my god brainwashed mech pilots wouldn't actually be a good idea? And mechs themselves wouldn't be very effective weapons? Should we tell everyone? Should we throw a party? Should we invite Yoshiyuki Tomino?