This is a bit more like the ratio I'm wanting to go for. With the super squinty/higher set eyes (with smaller irises ofc), protruding chin, & closer hairline that Id has.
Either make it like the middle (just giving him those⬆ changes) or make it like the right and give him a straighter nose as well-
better? hmmm maybe. idk, with the pose the hair was in front of the mouth, maybe I havent improved, he still really looks like how I draw Fei