#CRPFantasyFoxes 🦊 We're doing a 📣 pitch outline for today's Discussion Den! BUT we're using emojis to do it!
Use an emoji and short description for each:
What it's about
What's at stake
What will hook readers
Tropes
Emotions
Setting
Tension
Add more ➕ or less ➖ to your pitch and have ✨fun! 🙌
1: Stemming from my own fear of dogs, they were never domesticated in my fantasy world.
2: At one point of doing research, I had 6 internet tabs saved for llamas alone.
3: I had a 15 page outline critiqued by a CP before I wrote even a single word of the first draft.
#CRPfantasyfoxes #Camptrivia
Content warning: one scene contains an on-page animal death
I don’t know if anyone needs to hear this but be careful sending your MS to anyone who doesn’t have a #WritingCommunity presence and responds to your #ABCPit offering #betareading. A lot of these “services” are people who will ask for money, run your whole MS through ChatGPT, and call it “feedback.”
#CRPfantasyfoxes
A god🐴 breaks free of its cage of stars ✨ and a hunter 🏹 must find it and the person 🧍♂️ controlling it, before they kill ☠️ again.
Hooks: Godkiller X House of the Beast ⛩️👹
Emotion: rage 😡, devastation💔, but growth 📈
Setting: spooky forest 🌲
Tension: two hunters ⚔️ 🐈 vs 🐈⬛