More rambling. Darker themes? Ish?
It was already pretty intense before but... How do you even illustrate how absolutely unhinged this man's devotion is to Sidurgu when he's lost Halone?
It should be uncomfortable to the viewer. It's obsessive, violent, codependent...
Fray of the Onyx Shade
Put his hands on someone in violence? No problem. Easy. Eager at most times.
Touch the skin/scale exposed when Sidurgu's got his shirt off, even in SFW ways? He's a mess.
I think it gets worse with his faith in Halone shattered and he reroutes all of that devotion to Sidurgu.