I always try to take creative notes to heart, whether I interpret them correctly or not remains to be seen.
My colors in Procreate.
1) update
2) first pass
3) line art
Drawn by @rick-leonardi.bsky.social
James Stone
Ver cool, but dark.
Colorists in my experience live in mortal dread of their work looking good on screen, but printing too dark.
Give it a think!