Book had a conlang (which is fine) but the made-up word that made me slam the book shut had a glossary entry that was just "a belt." Nothing culturally significant about it. Just a belt.
David J. Stuart
alright y'all, what's the pettiest reason you DNF'd a book?
I'll go first- the protag of the book disparaged Star Trek's Seven of Nine and said she wasn't sexy